Saturday, December 14, 2013

The Tricky Elf

One time I saw a tricky elf.This tricky elf gives good kids coal. He gave my brother coal when he was good. It was the strangest thing ever.I didn't get a tricky elf.My elf gave me toys.I had to share with my brother.That night the tricky elf came back.He made a big mess in the house.I had to clean it up.That morning he disappeared.Finally, the mess was gone. That was a close one!
My parents came downstairs. They said, "What are you doing?" I said, "Just cleaning up." They didn't know about the elf. Should I tell them? I am thinking I should. I told them but they thought I was joking. I told them to stay up all night. The tricky elf put a trap on my parents. I was nervous. I tried to save them but the elf saw me. I got the key and let them out. We moved to a new house and the elf has not been seen since.

The End


  1. I love reading your stories Kailyn, you are so talented! I look forward to reading more!

  2. This was a great story peanut! The way you wrote it allowed me to picture everything that was happening. I can't wait to read more!